Open Poetry #7 |
Who Can I Blame? |
Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Who Can I Blame? Who can I blame? I only had one from age ten on. One parent trying too be two a feat not easy. Who's fault was it she died, and left me motherless? A father trying to make up for the loss giving in to all my requests, creating a monster. Yes, I said monster, that's what I became spoiled rotten. A spoiled rotten brat to terrorize my Dad, how he didn't kill me I don't know. I still wonder who I blame for my disadvantages for the imperfections of my youth? There is no one to blame I am an adult now grown with grown children. My life went on even though there was no one to blame, cause we are who we are. Living in the past we do not grow we only harbor memories to use as excuses. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thoughtful poem you have here. I believe all said and done sometimes we have ourselves to blame for our ways. At least after we are old enough to know better. I hope you find your answers. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Who's to blame ? Heck I don't know. If I would think about it there could be many to blame, but I prefer to look forward and live life now. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Words of wisdom, Gloria! Very nice! Denise |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
LD~ This was fantastic, great truth in abundance. Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Temptress: Thanks for reading and responding, I appreciate your kindness. Munda: Thanks for reading, and I also do not dwell on the topic, just was forced upon me by circumstance, life is too beautiful to trample upon living in the past. Denise: Thank You very much. tracie66: Wow, I was not expecting a fantastic out of this one, so I thank you most kindly, glad you enjoyed it. |
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