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Oh gracious God, fill my desire
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Oh gracious God, fill my desire |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Oh, gracious God, fill my desire, Apollo, with your soothing lyre, Command the everlasting dance! Evoke in me the bygone love,-- The days of rapture and romance! And let the Cupid from above Turn green with jealousy and envy, And glimmer in the somber sky! Apollo, with affection, hand me The gifts of Muses and then, I Shall write of love as none before me Have ever loved nor ever wrote! And then the mortals shall adore me, And fancy wisdom of my thought. Then, dear Apollo, I shall praise And with my pen recite your grace! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This, my prayer, does master speak... lyric of my heart to seek. Smiles of gods, on me bestow, Grant me love, lest I grow cold. forgive me master. I forget myself. and what a relief that is! Lovely words,sir. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
God grant master this heartfelt gift And through memories he shall sift Searching for love like no other Caring and compassionate as a new mother Apollo, he will sing your praise If you'll set his pen ablaze Great work, master. Love the theme!  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanks guys, both of your repsonses are beautiful and I hope he answers your prayers also... Thanks |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Master(I feel like jeanie in a bottle,haha) I loved this romantic poem of yours! Me likes |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you Romantic Heart |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Master -- This is truly exceptional! ________________________ Shall write of love as none before me Have ever loved nor ever wrote ________________________ I love this! "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you Angel, glad you liked it! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Master~ Ahhhhhh ... out of the labyrinth ! Wonderfully done, sir. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanks to you Marge! |
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