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Can You And I? (Repost of one of my favorite poems for challenge)
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Can You And I? (Repost of one of my favorite poems for challenge) |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Can You And I? Can you begin at the base of my mountain slowly climb till reaching the cliff at the utmost top? If I suggested you jump would you, could you, or would you hold onto what you started with till the end? Could you deep sea dive the depths of my ocean concurring the schools of fish currently in control? Would you drown if my oceans depth was to deep or would you rise to the surface for air now and then? Can you diagnose and repair my computer's main frame replacing mother board and ram memory gone bad? Will it require erasing all the memories of the past to reboot and start my repaired main frame all over again? Can a locksmith you become unlocking stubborn doors or are keys a hindrance to you preferring openness? If I locked myself out would you come rescue me or would your priorities leave me finding other measures? Would you allow me to scale your mountain memorizing every ridge bungee jump within your security till daylight turns to night? Could I reach the peak and still see the beautiful valley below through eyes that embrace nature piece by piece? Can I surf the tides of your ocean starting with the highest as it's intense wave caresses my imagination? Could I savor the lowest tide caressing the evening relaxed in the softness of the sandbar below the water's rule? Can I play on the keys of your computer make them come alive with the touch of my fingertips creating romance? Can my computer and your computer network together creating a powerful mega force no one can corrupt? Can I become a master key in your life unlocking all the closed doors so freedom can reign? Can I use my key to unlock our fantasy's making way for two single worlds to become one? Can you and I climb the tallest mountain together hand in hand guiding each other through the journey like there's no tomorrow? Can you and I hang glide over the valley below our sky line floating away further into our destiny forever together? |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
*sigh* this one is a keeper for sure. i can see why it's one of your favorites. your work always holds for me such honesty and pure emotion. elegantly written. take care. amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Amy: Thank you very much for reading and enjoying. I'm also happy my poetry touches you, that's an honor to any poet. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Definitely a favourite ! Great writing Gloria ! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wonderful poem. I hope he said yes to all of these questions, if so then it has to be true love. Would you allow me to scale your mountain memorizing every ridge bungee jump within your security till daylight turns to night? Could I reach the peak and still see the beautiful valley below through eyes that embrace nature piece by piece? ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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