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Freedom (Pantoum) |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Among mighty trees, my spirit flies free Unbounded to life’s irrational rules Wandering the forest of fantasy Enchanted by magic only for fools Unbounded to life’s irrational rules I spread my wings on winds of make believe Enchanted by magic only for fools Riding the Unicorn from morn till eve I spread my wings on winds of make believe Seeing the world through the eyes of a child Riding the Unicorn from morn till eve Feeling life’s wisdom is driving me wild Seeing the world through the eyes of a child Finding truth with the golden eyed dragon Feeling life’s wisdom is driving me wild Revived is the mystic of Avalon Finding wisdom with the golden eyed dragon The secrets of life no longer concealed Revived is the mystic of Avalon The true art of living once more revealed The secrets of life no longer concealed Wandering the forest of fantasy The true art of living once more revealed Among mighty trees my spirit flies free [This message has been edited by Munda (edited 06-02-2000).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Well, I enjoyed this. I cannot comment on the type of poem it is because I have no knowledge of it.  The subject and content were wonderful though. Forgive my stupidity. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
WOW a wonderful poem, what an imagination you have. I love the images especially I spread my wings on winds of make believe Seeing the world through the eyes of a child Riding the Unicorn from morn till eve Feeling life’s wisdom is driving me wild Seeing the world through the eyes of a child Finding truth with the golden eyed dragon Feeling life’s wisdom is driving me wild Revived is the mystic of Avalon great poem. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Munda~ So beautifully done. These are not easy to accomplish, but you've made it flow so seemingly effortless. Wonderful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is fantastic, Munda! Seeing through the eyes of a child is the way to go! It's so nice to see you posting again! I missed you! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SAY HEY-- MUNDA-GIRL is back...cool  and back with an AWESOME poem... this is enchanting in its imagery. nice to have you posting again later munda-gator jm There are places inside our souls ... that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts ... that need to be loved this much. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Well thank you guys. Although I have very little time at the moment I will try to be here more often. Missed you too !  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Beautifully written... enjoyed muchly Munda... |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
OOOOH I like dis! Ok now I really want to try a Pantoum, you did a beautiful job Munda! I enjoyed the content as well as the style. You are a wonderful poet, and I enjoy seeing what new stuff you have up yer sleeve for us! ~Heather |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Thank you guys. It's good to see not everybody forgot who I am. XAngel, if you have coffee au lait, we can do pantoum |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
of course there is cafe au lait!!! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Okay ! I'll bring the cookies !  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Fabulous my friend, simply fabulous. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Thank you Gloria, my fabulous friend. |
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