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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
There is love and true love Paths and places Cold shoulders and smiling faces But, All of which break down to the Core like the rain when it pours, In this life,this tour For you and your loved to Explore. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
jeremiah, i long to read more of your work. curious why you chose here to post your first one?? i appreciate the time you take to read others words. i have a feeling you have alot to say yourself. welcome to passions!! dark or otherwise...... kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Hello Jeremiah, Welcome to Passions in Poetry! And welcome to Passions in Prose. We appreciate you posting, but since this is a prose forum, this poem doesn't belong here. I'm gonna scootch it on over to Open Poetry #7. Please feel free to post any prose here in the future however. Thanks, Christopher |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Jeremiah Johnson - I saw that movie at least 10 times.... Can't resist RR... If your poetry is as good as the movie, I'll be a fan...  |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Gripping and tight - this poem stung tears from my eyes. I'm so glad you got shunted over here! I'll be watching for you! ~ ~ ~ The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Thank you all for your replies. and keep reading my stuff i have alot on dark passions. and i'll keep reading your work. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I like the way you contrast the good and the bad in life. An existence with only the one or the other would be unbearable, would it not. my opinon (my keyboad isn't woking,can yo tell?). Yes. In my opinion we should put all those bad things down to experience, it all adds to the character, to our understaning of life. Uta Lotharingia "Wir wollen nicht Wert und Sinn ... wir wollen Unwert und Unsinn" Raoul Hausmann |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Your poems are short...put powerful. You are dangerous my friend.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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