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Who is this man? (in response to Christopher)
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Who is this man? (in response to Christopher) |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State 
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Who is this man that is much like me Who just as I, likes to fly life free Soaring and searching ever higher Quenching each and every desire Is he just as strong and stand his ground Not letting darkness keep him tied and bound Is he just like me and wear an iron skin Only letting someone special explore within Is he as caring and gentle as I can be Can his love go to the depth’s of the sea Does he carry a soul full of passion And will he share it in a loving fashion Do his dreams reach the silvery moon bright Share intimate moments under a star-lit night? Would he let two souls mesh together as one Keep a heated desire just as hot as the sun Who is this man that is much like me Who just as I, likes to fly life free He will surely capture his one true love Who will soar with him, like a beautiful dove |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
I don't know that I was really resonding to a challenge...... Just seemed that Christopher and I are very much alike. Call it what you may!  ~Sheri [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 04-21-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Intriging... |
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Cassanova Junior Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 39Turlock, Ca. |
Intriguing indeed! Irie, I can tell you for sure, that Chris is a pain in the rear! He's a smart alec and... (shh) here he comes... I'll tell you the rest later.  This is wonderful though, far, far more than he deserves! Jason |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
I have been wondering why all, well...... some of you have been picking on him!  I only wish I had half of what it appears he has to offer! I guess I'll just have to wait for him to be a pain in the rear to me before I pick on him my self! Anyway, thanks for your comments, I think? ~Sheri |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Very tender, very loving, I was very moved by this one. The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Irie! My goodness! Whatever did I do to deserve this? This is incredible! You're right in saying that this is much along the same lines as I! I don't know if you're half as insane as I, but at the least, you understand the "important" emotions attached to the feeling we label love. You've written an incredible poem which I am honored to feel was inspired by me! Thank you, go in peace! Jason - I'm gonna beat you half to death! |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Thank you RoseMary for you reply. I'm glad you liked this. Chris.....I'm flattered by your response! And yes, it was inspired by you! And as far as being insane..... I'm known to be a bit wild!!!  I guess we do operate along the same lines!Thank you so much for you comments! *HUGS* Oh, and by the way, I'll help you beat Jason Half to death! hehe |
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Bbuzz Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 76Washinton State |
Ooopss...posted reply for the wrong message... tried to delete but it wouldn't let me... Sorry!!!!  [This message has been edited by Bbuzz (edited 04-22-2000).] |
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