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A Journey
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A Journey |
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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
Two start a Journey...... A Journey of discovery... A journey of wonder Two start a Journey... A journey of tears... A journey of pain Two start a Journey... I give you my hand for yours.... I kiss you for luck and away we go... Two start a Journey.......To become One |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Wishing you a pleasant journey and few stumbles. Eric. |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
very nice and flowing...I enjoyed it!!!  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
This was beautiful. I especially enjoyed the last stanza. "Two become One" lovely! take care, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ooohh,...short and sweet. 'Tis true....it is a journey. Wonderful poem. Take care. *Peace. |
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