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slipknot
Junior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 25


0 posted 2000-06-08 02:31 AM


you are back with me
but only for a while
not like before
hmmm, before it could never be.

that's what you said
as I lowered my head
you still think of me
I know you want me, I can see

it would be wrong you say
like it's nothing,
this game you continue to play
all the while I sit and wait

one day, one day you'll be back
but wait, you got a new man
you're on a different track
try and try as hard as I can

you'll never be with me
your heart's with me
and everything else
go ahead, deny your feelings, keep cheating yourself


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svtcobra
Junior Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 14
Syracuse,NY USA
1 posted 2000-06-08 02:55 AM


its good to see a new post bro................


keep up the emotion

Ethan Halo
Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
2 posted 2000-06-08 03:00 AM


i liked this a lot. the sporadic rhythm and rhyme scheme reflect the emotions behind the words. very real. i dig it. keep up the good stuff.

 We all got somethin' we need to atone for.

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