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I Wish I Could Be Guided Forever
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I Wish I Could Be Guided Forever |
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LenMcC1 Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 68 |
I Wish I Could Be Guided Forever When all of your beliefs Are lost in a song Who can you turn to? Where can you run? He told you what to believe in And how to remember and let go But my reality is not the same as his So how do I really know? Someone once told me to hold on To keep fighting for my life But everyday day I’m faced With millions of wrongs and not rights I hear the voice of a generation singing again Telling me hold on for my dear life If he can do it why can’t I Maybe he was stronger; maybe he learned how to cry In the same vain, I was told That everything was so hard But I have to go out make something of myself How can I when I’m afraid of it all? And where would I even start? I have never ever felt like going down But that’s a surprise that wouldn’t surprise Who knows what I would do with a thought and gun by my side Naked in the mirror I look at all of my fears What am I supposed to see? Who am I supposed to believe? Only I can know No else will ever really understand Will she understand the thoughts of this man? Will there ever really be a she? |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
There is a special "she" out there for you...you just need patience! I think right now you need a good cry- to let it all go dear!! ((HUGS)) Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This is a very deep piece and I only hope this is a little bit of make believe and not how you are totally feeling, especially the part about the gun. Things sometimes seem alot worst than what they really are and I'm sure there is someone special out there it just takes time. Hugs to from me TC~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I concur with Tracie ... writing can be such a wonderful outlet for our emotions, and if this depth is from your heart, please share this with a close friend, family member or counsellor, for there is so much to look forward to. Others can understand and help you through this pain ... please take care ... Best wishes and prayers, /Kit |
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