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Lorraine Nisbet
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since 2000-05-18
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Jersey City, NJ USA

0 posted 2000-06-07 08:56 PM




Angel's On A Mission


I'm on a mission
soaring through clouds,
going as fast
as I'm allowed.

"Tinkerbell
out of my way,
I have to be there
by the break of day.

The sunrise looks promising
I pause in wonderment,
colors so beautiful
no time to lament.

You earned your wings
you will pass through the dome,
I have to be there
to guide you home.

I get there
just in time,
together
we are sublime.
      

Our wings are touching
softly with love,
we're on our way
slowly to the above.

Just before sunrise
look up to see,
angels ascending
gleefully.

~Lorraine Nisbet~


[This message has been edited by Lorraine Nisbet (edited 06-08-2000).]

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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-06-08 12:44 PM


~Lorraine,...well, well....this is so beautiful.  Such determination in your words....such lovely images painted too. Thanks. Take care. *Peace.
Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
2 posted 2000-06-08 03:26 PM


THis is really pretty,....

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 2000-06-08 05:42 PM


Lorraine this is so sweet and lovely, great job!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2000-06-08 09:47 PM


Lorraine

Beautiful! Sweet sentiments this one
holds! You have brought a tear to my
eye and made my heart smile. Thank you.
Amy  


 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




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5 posted 2000-06-09 06:34 AM


Lorraine~
Delightful read.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lorraine Nisbet
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 218
Jersey City, NJ USA
6 posted 2000-06-09 05:25 PM



SpitFire, Cuddlez, Dark Angel, Amy and Marge~

Thank you all for your wonderful replies.  I'm flying!

~Lorraine

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur


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