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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Shattered We so desperately hold on to any pieces of love that we shared. Even when our love is shattered and pieces are scattered everywhere we still hold on and we still care. But someday we will have to let go with a sigh. Cause love may take a long time to go away but even love can die. Jameslee@ June06,2000 |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi jmlee12345 To let go of something is too difficult and I feel. Why it is that way when we still hold so much love ? I guess pieces can be grouped with faith and care and I don't know why I still believe it. I'm sorry its just my idea. Sincerely A_L |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thanks for your comment Amazon_Lover. No need to apologize about your experiences with love. We all have our own opinions and experiences. In my experiences I have always lost everyone that I love...probably my fault. I still have hope that love is real and I feel like if I could find someone that valued me and accepted me as I am that would be love to me. Of course I would feel the same way about them. James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
very very nice work. I enjoyed it thouroughly. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Love will come your way James.....One day you will be walking along and then "BAM" you will fall and be totally completely lost in love. I guess it is being shattered too in a way. This is a moving poem with feeling.....Time heals all Best wishes  It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So true James ... sometimes we hold on to love too long for fear we'll never find it again. You will though ... it is real, and with a heart as tender as yours, you will find it. Well done. Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 06-07-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
James, Mourn not at the loss of love, for another one will come around to hold your tender feathers together, creating new wings for you to fly high... you have written a heart-felt poem, here. My best regards to you, Sudhir. Hey you, out there in the cold, Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me? Hey you, standing in the aisle, With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me? Hey you, don't help them to bury the light. Don't give in without a fight. Hey you, out there on your own, Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me? Hey you, with your ear against the wall, Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me? Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone? Open your heart, I'm coming home.... by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
***In my experiences I have always lost everyone that I love...probably my fault*** ---No more than 50% James...so don't beat yourself up for all of it.--- ***I still have hope that love is real and I feel like if I could find someone that valued me and accepted me as I am that would be love to me. Of course I would feel the same way about them. James*** ---THAT IS LOVE, hon...seeing someone's value and accepting them as they are.--- James...The wanting/needing of love, does not die. There is someone for you.Keep looking and she will find you...that's the way it happens.Just be yourself...you sound like a nice guy to me. MagnoliaBlue Pay a visit to: http://cyberageadventures.com You will love it! "A poem is just an expression of my life and heart."*CJB* ~*Skipper Jim, I love you!Your Lady June*~ |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
James, I can relate to this poem very well....i wrote one that is similar called Crushed. No matter what happens hold onto the memories. you will make it through. Good Luck! ParisGrl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you ethome, First_Night, Kit, Sudhir, Magnolia, and ParisGirl. I was thinking about when you break up with someone you love even though physically they are gone...you still have all the memories and feelings..they are still alive in your heart...even if your heart is broken..and you don't want to let go...and it seems like the effects of love take a long time to go away...and if we hold on too long we feel the pain of love or sorrow of love...so we let our love die...this is only my experience. Magnolia you have a way with words that makes me feel better. I am mounrning lost opportunities to love in my past and also opportunities I have right now that may or may not work out as expected. Actually I am in love with Lena. ParisGirl are you from Paris? James |
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