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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
Gaze apon yourself for a moment do you feel something in your silence contented, solid peace or torrents of emotion. Slip into your minds bomb shelter arguments begin, time to bring out the heavy weapons of history. Direct hits on eachothers hearts reducing eachother to dust along the way. Once there was dreams, now there lies ruins. Reaper sharpens his tool delivers the final cut now silence, bitterness and pain. Still alive, still in your private universe yet can see no more beyond walls no time for repair the feeling has gone. Rich  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Slashing indeed! Good one.  |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
I relate completely to your poem...tells of the truth that we hurt those we love...very wee written!!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fantastic poem, Rich! Thanks for sharing it! |
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