Open Poetry #7 |
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The Letters |
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Sunshine
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The Letters Each letter lovingly cherished, for each letter sent just to proclaim our friendship, just to show our intent that there are reasons on this earth, to adore you, m’dear each letter cherished, with words alone you hear. Each letter bears my heart, each one flies to you, our souls traversed long and far, finally found a clue ~ that there is a person out there, a soul-mate not met and when you find this person, you rejoice … kismet! So do not let us tarry, but treasure all the times when our paths now cross, even if in our minds… we will share our laughter, we will share our pain… and thank God we found each other, for look at what we’ve gained! 7 June, 2000 ©KRJ Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hey there, Sunshine - great piece of sentiment here - long distance friendship and...? |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
and when you find this person, you rejoice … kismet! yah! luck is what it requires... nice sentiments, flowing feelings... Karilea, the pen you hold flows with the ink of your thoughts... Regards, sudhir. P.S. The 'summer' poem is out, called 'A summer evening', I don't know if that's any good!!! Meanwhile Pink Floyd, reigns supreme still, Hey you, out there in the cold, Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me? Hey you, standing in the aisle, With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me? Hey you, don't help them to bury the light. Don't give in without a fight. Hey you, out there on your own, Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me? Hey you, with your ear against the wall, Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me? Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone? Open your heart, I'm coming home.... by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall |
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Sunshine
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LJA, your question is???... Thanks, Sudhir! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
hi SUnshine beautiful poem, Each letter bears my heart, each one flies to you, our souls traversed long and far, finally found a clue ~ that there is a person out there, a soul-mate not met and when you find this person, you rejoice … kismet! I know what it is like to get a letter from someone you dearly. In fact I got one today, it just made the whole day. anyway beautiful poem, lovely. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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Sunshine
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Rock on Brian, and keep those letters close to your heart. Thanks for pointing out the lines that caught your attention! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sunshine: I loved this, really did....when one believes, our thinking and trust can have such a tremendous influence on how we perceive and just add a touch of sun and the mere sighting of a rainbow and we're cast in a spell... Sadly, when spelt, the letters are not always a lasting commitment but more like sunshine, here today, gone tomorrow but I look for the sun and of course, I hope I will see a smidgen of a rainbow...always! Take care HUSG |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, Lovely poem and sweet thoughts and sentiment. This is exactly how my husband and I started out....letters, then on to bigger things which eventually brought us together. Hope your dreams come true. Beautiful writing!! ![]() LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Sunshine
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RG, LoneWolf, what lovely sentiments you have both expressed. Thank you so much for reading... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sunshine... This is BEAUTIFUL! the emotion you put into this more than paid off. this is just lovely m'friend. isn't it great when we realize we have found love and that the person feels the same?! you have written your heart dear...and it is wonderful to see that you are happy! take care, amy ![]() "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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