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Moon Harp |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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That moonlit flight the night we met there were stars all around in the air, they shone like diamonds through the mist and a moon harp played on your golden hair. You spread your charms over silvered arms and I knew when you started to stare that you were losing your heart to me and a moon harp played on your golden hair. The night light fingers spread up and down and your yeilding eyes were soft and round, my heart was whirling everywhere upside down up above the ground I found love in the air. A spell was the mood like a champagne tune it was the start of a long love affair and when we kissed on that night a moon harp played on your golden hair. In the heavens above wrapped in your love there was never a time to compare. That moonlit flight that Baltic night when a moon harp played on your golden hair. Celtrue2000@E3B1G9 |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Ethome! This is a lovely verse, full of imagery and romance ... wonderful poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lovely and romantic ethome...Welcome  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Welcome to Passion's. Lovely thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Welcome. Enjoyed your poetry. |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Grand Entrance Grand poem thanks for the read |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oh to bare a whirling heart. How wonderful, and a beatuiful poem ethome. Welcome to Passions! Well Done ~Sheri |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
ethome~ Lovely!! Welcome to passions!! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"and the moon harp played on your golden hair"...what lovely lines. This is a very beautifully done poem, ethome...so glad you have posted some of your poetry here...hope to see more. Welcome! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful thoughts, ethome. Welcome to Passions!! Looking forward to more!! Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
wow! I was enchanted! Beautiful poem! Grand entrance!!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Very sweet verses here Moonlight ~ harps ~ golden hair Thank you for such a romantic read! Coco |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Absolutely gorgeous! The title drew me in from the start...I love it, welcome to passions! *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Ethome! Wonderful poem ~netswan |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
Very nice poem, I'll keep my eye out for more from you! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Wonderful poem ethome. Welcome to Passions. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks to all for such kind words! |
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