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A Distant Land
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A Distant Land |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The sun shines brightly outside < !signature-->Its rays reflect off the incoming tide The water washes over the sand My mind wanders to a distant land I am transported back to another place There I can almost see his face The knight was courageous and noble too He rode through the forest from out of the blue Looking invincible on his trusty steed The maiden was sure he could fulfill her needs She sat there at the edge of the beach He rode up and stopped within arms reach Good afternoon my lady he said to the maiden fair One look in his deep blue eyes turned into a stare She would gladly bare her soul to this man For her he'll do all he possibly can The couple sat and talked for many hours Out on the beach near the beautiful flowers He asked her to dinner that evening Although it was happening she had a hard time believing She went to his castle for a fabulous meal He told her that his feelings were real In a month they would be man and wife For all time they would share a life Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 06-07-2000).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
What a wonderful fairy tale.  I loved it. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Lone Wolf, Glad to see a poem with a HAPPY ENDING from you All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
LW~ oh i liked this..liked a lot this was so wonderful...so fresh to read something with a happy ending...glad to see you are at least daring to hope these days. take care! amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~LW,...ok I love this. Beautifully happy tale you've written about...in such a perfectly poetic fashion. Thank you friend for this great read. Take care. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Temptress....Thank you, it was a pleasure to write. Jeffrey....Not ALL of them are sad my friend. I do like HAPPY endings!!! Amy....Very glad I could brighten your day with my fairy tale poem. There is always hope my friend. You too!! Spit Fire....You are welcome friend....happy to share a tale of hope and love with you. I really liked writing it. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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