Open Poetry #7 |
Wheel of Time (repost from 4/99) |
sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Age after age on the wheel of time I have been yours and you have been mine Our souls once created as a matching pair Life after life we are destined to share Time after time in the web of fate Our threads will meet, will merge, will mate And course through eternity side by side Turn after turn you have been my bride When from this turning your soul does part I will go on with but half of my heart Knowing in time that we shall love again Not a question of 'if' but a question of 'when' Each turn of life's wheel our souls bind together Heaven will be when that bond lasts forever... Steven Seaman To thine own self be true... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
its soo sweet yuh good to have yuh back and stay i hope |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
*small gulp* Uh...Sea, this is deep sir. I love the whole idea you used here of that "wheel"....that time after time, that endless ending. Very contradicting thoughts, which make it so beautiful. A sort of "forever" that doesn't last....? Does that make sense? Did I read this right? Anyways, it's beautiful how I read it. Really glad to see you back btw.... "Fantasies enrich our lives to the fullest, but true satisfaction comes from creating your own story in the real world! Live out your fantasies & make a storybook with beautiful pictures for the world to enjoy! -poetFemme |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I believe in soulmates too. This is one fine poem sir! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When from this turning your soul does part I will go on with but half of my heart Knowing in time that we shall love again Not a question of 'if' but a question of 'when' Each turn of life's wheel our souls bind together Heaven will be when that bond lasts forever... ---------- this is excellent sea, love the time and wheel metaphors. very well written. take care, jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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