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My Favorite Poem (yuh i'm sure yuh prolly read it before..oh and repost hehe) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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On there so high above she came Born from a silver streak of flame She tore a trail through my soul Burning passion I can't control Her beauty described in mere words A sweeter song than morning birds Who ever hope and ever try To please her as she passes by When she dips and when she bends Her graceful body never ends And when I look into her eyes I see a fire that never dies Watching her dance toward the ground The greatest entrance makes no sound And then forever my life has worth I've seen where heaven touched the earth |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh Walt,...such beauty in this here piece. Wonderfully expressed. Truly a treasure to share. Well done. Take care. *Peace. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow Walt ---! Great favorite Poem Beautiful ~netswan |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
It's terrific to see this side of you Walt ... this is a wonderful and touching poem. I loved the last line particularly ... very well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, this is beautiful, Walt! It is one of my favorites of yours too! Denise |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Walt the romantic? Christopher and Sven may have some competition now. Beautiful from start to finish. I love this!  Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
wow, I hadn't seen this one....this is beautiful...it combines so many feelings and thoughts, softly erotic, and very romantic...like this one a lot |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Oh Walt! I don't think I've had the pleasure of reading this before! WOW! I have to say this is my all time favorite of yours too! Way to go bud! I LOVE IT! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Indeed it is very nice to see this side of your poetry... this is wonderful, romantic and passion filled verse. thank you for sharing it for the challenge take care, jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Wow...Walt...or did I already say...Wow...Walt! ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
my cookies dont always work and so i was thinkin bout all the nice replies to my poem and i absentmindedly typed *sniff for my password |
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