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Waiting, Wishing, & Praying
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Waiting, Wishing, & Praying |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Waiting, Wishing, & Praying Amy M. Kennedy She sits and waits...her heart trying to win Tears fall down her face...as she realizes maybe she was wrong afterall Not wanting to give up hope...she turns her pain to the sky knowing her love isn't a sin The angels and heaven always there...even in her most tragic downfall Waiting, wishing, praying...is all that she can do She has made her feelings clear...nothing more to say What more do you do...when you've said the words "I love you" She feels in her heart...the time is slipping away The wind blows all around her...as she plays back the memories in her mind Of a more simpler time...when things were right When all that mattered...was the two of them And holding one another all throughout the night She knows life is hard...full of ups and downs Wouldn't change a thing...if she had to do it again So she sits and waits...tears silently fall when no one is around And she whispers the name of her lover...and it's carried by the wind. "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
When you wouldn't change a thing, you know that you've been true to yourself ... If only things were simpler Amy ... sigh ... lovely, touching sentiments. Best wishes, /Kit |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Amy That was wonderful and pleasant to hear. Hope and wish your love comes true Sincerely A_L |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Amy That was wonderful and pleasant to hear. Hope and wish your love comes true Sincerely A_L |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Sigh........the silent tears we shed. A beautiful poem Amy. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
good things come to those who wait...*smile* I know the waiting is the hardest part but we need time to work thru all the complications of love as well as the many emotions. you know you've done your best..to let them know how you feel, now you have to let fate work a while. easy for me to say right  beautiful poem amy-girl very lovely. jm |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Amy, What a sad poem......i liked it though......keep your head held high girl. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see. Keep up the great writing! PG |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thanks guys for your replies and encouragement. here's hoping everything truly does work out for the best. i know what i want...now here's hoping my love feels the same and knows what they want and is willing to fight for it. you guys are the best. love ya, amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Amy-girl....I know I know I know........this is a heart felt piece...my heart was tugged at every word...you have my thoughts and my prayers that everything works out as it should...the best way for you!!!**Angel Wing Hugs** |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Amy, Heartfelt and touching. I was hanging on every word, my friend. Hang in there....it will turn out as it should. I hope it is how you would like it to be. Great writing. Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Amy....we wait, wish, and pray with you! Great work! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
She sits and waits and has learned about the bruises that life has tested upon her, and she knows deep inside - that each love and pain that she has had in her life makes her grow so much stronger. Lovely, heartfelt poem. Keep it, don't let it blow away in the wind -- ~netswan |
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