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Open Poetry #7

All a waste in time

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

0 posted 2000-06-06 12:07 PM

What makes me love you so?
The look in your eyes,
locks into mine,
you hold me close,
I start to shine.

What makes me love you so?
We need not speak,
for all is said,
it's all intense,
as we head to bed.

What makes me love you so?
We laugh and joke,
I love to hear,
what makes you smile,
what brings a tear.

What makes me love you so?
The hours we spent,
in quiet discussions,
lashing out,
our hearts discretions.

What makes me love you so?
The gentle touch,
against my face,
the look within,
the soft embrace.

What makes me love you so?
Your hand each day,
enclosed with mine,
walking down,
my heart was blind.

What makes me love you so?
Is it just a fact,
that your only slime?
It was just a moment,
wasted in time?

What makes me love you so?
For months it seemed,
the perfect thing,
we became best friends,
but it was just a fling.

[This message has been edited by tulip (edited 06-06-2000).]

Dragon's Soul
Junior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 25

1 posted 2000-06-06 12:18 PM

ouch harsh
but i guess we've all been there
atleast i have
great poem
nice twist

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

2 posted 2000-06-06 02:22 AM

Oh no!! Are you sure your over her?...slime!
Ouch, me thinks she knows already. Good read. Marcy

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

3 posted 2000-06-06 10:57 PM

Dragon,
It IS harsh, but unfortunately reality. It's hard when you really believed in your own feelings, as well as the others!
Alle,
No I'm not over HIM, and deep down, I don't think he's over me, but I have to deal with the cards I've been dealt!!!

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