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spiked
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0 posted 2000-06-05 11:21 PM


                 Fantasy

I’ve taken a flight of my imagination
Seeing visions of desire and hope
Spanning through this daydream
As I sleep in this state of unrest
I can feel your exposed breast
Creeping into my fingertips
While I try to decipher fantasy from reality
In this so called dream of passion
Where your skin melts in mine
Feeling you breathe in, as I breathe out
Rhythmic clatter of heartbeats untamed
This dizzying feeling drives me insane
Sweat dripping down on my pounding chest
Gasping for air no time for rest
Moving in stride your presence untold
Feeling the fire embraced in your hold
I want so much more than this fantasy
And cross this dream into reality.


© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-06-06 01:10 AM


Red Rover, Red Rover,
send Richard on over...

mmm.  mmm.  mmm.

(no time to rest?)

a man after me own heart...
very, very, nice flow to this, spiked...

spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
2 posted 2000-06-06 01:29 AM


Was looking for more sexuality but as you know what comes out on paper is the way I leave it.
Thankx Serenity

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