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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Imagination The imagined soft touch upon my lips tasty as whipped cream topped strawberries thirst quenching for an overly parched soul. You see not my two eyes dancing your tune spiraling chemistry boiling me over brewed into longing from a simple glance. Wondering how you decorate my mind your face igniting overwhelming quivers your eyes quickly thawing frozen ideals. Road of silent endeavors grows intense racing through illusionary images lapping reality in seconds flat. You christen my vision with true essence a lost perplexity to sweet candied eyes drowning for more than imagination. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 06-05-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Lost dreamer, wonderful poem, really beautiful. I really loved these verses. Wondering how you decorate my mind your face igniting overwhelming quivers your eyes quickly thawing frozen ideals You christen my vision with true essence a lost perplexity to sweet candied eyes drowning for more than imagination. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lost Dreamer, Fantasy is fun, isn't it? A lovely vision you paint here with your words. Great writing!!  Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Brian: Thank You very much. Lone Wolf: Yes it most certainly is. Thanks for reading and your kind response. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So vividly picturesque ... a tastey poem indeed Lost Dreamer, I really enjoyed the images and flow! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful writing, Gloria! Seems like your imagination is working overtime! Denise |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh I like your dreams.....hehe It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Ld, I so much enjoyed this piece. Must have something to do with the fact that "dayDreaming" is one of my favorite things to do. Well Done! ~Sheri |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
LD~ wonderful expression and as the title read great imagination Great read TC~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I thank you all for reading and replying, I truly appreciate. |
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