~Eyes Of Your Heart Senryu~

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Open Poetry #7

~Eyes Of Your Heart Senryu~

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2000-06-05 02:51 PM

~EYES OF YOUR HEART SENRYU~

5-7-5

See not with your eyes
but look at me with your heart,
feel that I love you

*By Melissa Honeybee*

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

1 posted 2000-06-05 03:03 PM

Yes, I feel it, very sweet..

Parker

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 2000-06-05 04:27 PM

So much said in so few words...impressive to say the least

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

3 posted 2000-06-05 04:32 PM

Hi MB
This is wonderful.

"See not with your eyes
but look at me with your heart,
feel that I love you"

(((((((hugs))))))
A_L

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-06-05 08:09 PM

Melissa~

Very nicely done
We can depend on you to
Write a senryu

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

5 posted 2000-06-05 11:03 PM

Melissa.....you are certainly on a roll girl.

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown

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