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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I ask myself each passing night L ooking upon the moonlight sky O nly wanting you by my side V ery near to embrace each night E ven as we part each day Y ou drift into my mind and in my heart you remain O nly now have I come to believe U ntil you touched my heart could love be so real!  Coco Baci |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
As always I love your work. WONDERFUL!!! LOTS of LUV, Becky |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A wonderful feeling to be in love!  God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Coco!!! I just love this one. . . it's great to feel like this isn't it?? Wonderful my friend... ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CocoBaci~ Wonderful subject ... Marvelous acrostic. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
CocoBaci~ Beautiful poem! Loved the form and the words behind it! Marvelous! Seems yours and my thoughts are on the same wavelength these days. I wish you much luck in your discovery of love. take care amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Coco, Great acrostic poem!! Love is such a wonderful feeling, isn't it? Sweet piece, my friend. Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Very neat poem....so well written. Such a wonderful subject to write about too. Thanks for sharing it. *Peace. |
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