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Open Poetry #7
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Slashed soul
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since 2000-03-29
Posts 86
England
0 posted 2000-06-04 05:26 PM

Hold me when I cry
touch me when I am cold
be with me forever, young too old.

Smile at my errors
laugh at my jokes
kiss me in the night.

Love me constantly
eternally be my friend
buddies to the end.

Eye to eye we see
be here for me.

-Rich-
© Copyright 2000 RJEHKing - All Rights Reserved
INclan
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
1 posted 2000-06-04 07:55 PM

this reads very much like a marriage proposal...well done.

INclan
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