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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-04-20 05:54 PM

I belong to you
You belong to me
We are all alone
    Where sky touches sea,
    Where fate greets us,
And that is all we need

I take your hand
You take my heart
We are all there is
    While playing the part,
    While together in time,
And time getting short

I breathe you in as you are
You smile in pure delight
We are held by common truths
    With a whisper, a caressing sigh,
    With these things I belong to you,
And you are like kissing the sky

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-04-20 06:06 PM

I take your hand
You take my heart
We are all there is
    While playing the part,
    While together in time,
And time getting short

I breathe you in as you are
You smile in pure delight
We are held by common truths
    With a whisper, a caressing sigh,
    With these things I belong to you,
And you are like kissing the sky
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you got the *SIGH* part right...
perfection of devotion from your poets pen.
you write longing and the connection of two souls so perfectly...
this is another one on my list...and printing as I sigh...(smile)
beautiful jer,
might even last me for the long weekend *L*
stalking you where the sky touches the sea,
your jm

Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2000-04-21 02:58 AM

JML~ well, I'm not stalking you, I just love reading what you write......I've been gone a few days, just catching up. This, as usual, is soooooo romantic. Just love it.

-SEA

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

3 posted 2000-04-21 11:23 AM

I know I told you yesterday... but just wanted to send it upward to be enjoyed by all.

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

4 posted 2000-04-21 01:46 PM

Thanks for bringing this back, Claire .... It's one that I've enjoyed reading
Beautiful, JML ........

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2000-04-21 06:53 PM

Well, I have to bring this one up too. . . my good friend and co-defender of chivalry and romance has written and excellent poem and I want everyone to see it!!

Wonderful, my friend!!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2000-04-21 08:07 PM

lovely and perfect and perfectly lovely...

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

7 posted 2000-04-21 10:09 PM

What can I say that has not been said. I enjoy your poetry way much ;-)

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King

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