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Friendship (Part 2)
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Friendship (Part 2) |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion 
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I sense there is some danger here, in the secret thoughts I've read. Balladeer is being way too nice in all the things he's said. And Parker is a real sweetheart, with each and every thought, To which I now must ask myself, "My Gawwwd, what have I wrought?!!" Naturally, sweet Corinne, has clearly described my style, "Sweety" and a real good cook, and I make her smile. And all the other ladies have said they are so glad I'm here, (Notice they didn't same the same about that rascal Balladeer!) Old man Parker is the one of whom the ladies coo and swoon, His real demeanor will come to the fore, and it won't be too soon. And then they'll see, though not like Toe, he's still a reprobate, Then he can kiss off his chances here for any kind of date. Now concerning Toerag, the phantom of this place, I wish I could see more of him (without actually seeing his face) He's been gone way too long, and we've missed his verses (Except of course for the rocky flow, and the many misspelled curses.) As for the ladies who keep us in these skirmishes and wars, We love each and every one of you; you're who we're fighting for. We know, in our masculine way, that you wish we'd get along See? I'm just an innocent babe. I know women can do no wrong. The ever lovely Lorelei asures me this is so, And that the ladies of the Forums would never side with 'Deer or Toe. But then she sighs when she reads of Norse mythology and such What could it mean when she screams, "Yes! Oh Thor!" when we're in a clutch? In summary, sweet maidens dear, and all my other friends I'm glad I am a part of here, where muses' trails wend. Each one of you are part of me, I hope you feel the same, So, if I'm somewhat uncouth; Park, 'Deer and Toe are the ones to blame. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL... your really asking for it LOL great poem...your command of witty rhyme is evident...and how smart you are to smooze the ladies and get them on your side.. tho park will give you a run for your money there...he smoozes with the best of them  ask him about his pedestals LOL and never count out sweet-deer...he can flirt with the best of them.. Toe comes and goes these days...but good ole SY keeps Deer in check. great witty fun here, this rivalry should entertain us well for the summer... later-pirate-gator jm |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LongJohn~ In throes of the heart throughout the forum, I'm sure there's many here to score 'em. With just the flash of your sweet smile .. we'll wish you were here all the while. As for the Toe NOW where did he go ? He left a sparkling band for the Parker man! When it comes to *swoons* I fear .... I place mine with The Balladeer !  For he can simply turn a phrase and flirt with me in his own sweet ways. I don't mind saying he's got what it takes And he certainly is no reprobate ! All the ladies hearts that you guys tweak stand smiling in adoration's peak. It's all done with ever so much fun ... So keep it coming Ole 'uncouth' one !  Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
We know you are an innocent sir a babe led astray by the Toe 'deer and Parker are meanies And here I'll tell you so. A pirate makes the women swoon such danger in his verse so if you dare to absent yourself I'll have to learn to curse!  Love your poem! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
LongJohn, you are a clever one The way that you are smooozin' The ladies of the forum here Between your bouts of boozin'. You act so sympathetic So much nicer than the rest But everyone knows a pirate's Only interested in chests. The skull and crossbones is your flag Upon the ocean blue Though, I admit, it does look funny On a small canoe!  Don't count on ladies for your crew They're wise to you...and hip. They know that if you do go down It won't be on your ship!!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I must admit dear Parker Is the phantom of my dreams But Toe's the one who really has Enraptured me, it seems But then I met dear Balladeer His charismatic ways And when I met dear LngJhn My mind was in a daze All of them posses the touch The very special charms I don't know which will catch me When I fall into their arms We love you all so keep it up This never ending rift And ladies of the passionate kind On every word will drift Love ya's all Liz |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I wonder which one of you would win at the game of poker, if the four of you played together and didn't hide the joker, or at a poetry workshop held in Las Vegas, wonder which one of you would stay instead of spending all your wages? My guess is that you'd have a blast and all hang together, and we all know, the saying goes, birds of a sweet feather! Corinne |
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