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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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I’ve Given All I Had to Give I’ve given all I had to give I’ve lived the best that I could live I’ve loved the most that I could love I’ve reaped the coo of mourning dove I’ve been at degredation’s door I’ve helped the hungry and the poor I’ve played a Mother’s loving role I’ve known the hunger of the soul I’ve seen the sun rise o’er the bay I’ve danced a dance in month of May I’ve soared above the star-lit skies When first beholding newborn’s eyes I’ve shivered lonely in the night Afraid to be afraid of light I’ve pondered those decisions made For which I dearly, dearly paid I’ve felt the hollow hunger pain I’ve walked the streets in windswept rain I’ve known the joy of passion’s bliss I’ve felt warmth of loving kiss I’ve manned the helm and held the keel On Flying Dutchman’s golden heel I’ve lain alone on marbled floor While lifeblood from my wounds did pour I’ve felt the moonlight touch my face I’ve prayed to God for heavenly grace I’ve walked the walk in weary plod While following the steps of God I’ve been elated at the sight Of creature’s foot on winter’s white Of crimson, gold and umbered leaves Of crystal snowflakes on my sleeves And looking back in retrospect I have not any one regret I have not fame or noted wealth But I’ve been always true to self But now I’m weak, the end has come I’m happy with the songs I’ve sung I’ve given all I had to give I lived the best that I could live I catch a glimpse of azure sky And birds of feather flying by A rumpled swishing sound they make I beg to know the course they take Please step aside and let me through I’ve so much living yet to do So many wonders to be seen So many dreams I’ve yet to dream Elizabeth Santos 11/19/99 [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 06-04-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I can see why this is your favorite Elizabeth ... it's wonderful. I love your theme, your reminiscing, your look to the future ... leaves me feeling quietly contented and peaceful with positive anticipation of what is yet to come after a life well led. Best wishes, /Kit |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely poem here, Liz! This is really really beautiful and flows wonderfully! You have written around its theme brilliantly. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Fantastic! Elizabeth ~Gorgeous ~ Oh, how glad I am that you have had a chance to live life to its fullest! ~netswan |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Simply wonderful Elizabeth! To live a full life and still have time and the ambition to live it some more..... You're an inspiration to us all  Eric. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I catch a glimpse of azure sky And birds of feather flying by A rumpled swishing sound they make I beg to know the course they take Please step aside and let me through I’ve so much living yet to do So many wonders to be seen So many dreams I’ve yet to dream ---------- Liz, this is exceptional... written from both heart and soul.. wonderful lessons of life...wisdom and grace thank you for sharing it with us. take care kind-poet jm |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Liz, this is so wonderful! I can see why it's your favorite. If only everyone could live life this fully. Thank you for posting it. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
One of my favorites too, Liz...the possitive in it makes my heart sing!! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, this is positive while being realistic at the same time. It also showcases the tremendous inner strength and wisdom that you possess. I am honored to be considered your friend.  Denise |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
There's so much to live for...makes me wonder how one prepares for dying. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Liz-- simply beautiful! i can see why this one is your favorite. full of such compassion and grace. thanks so much for sharing this one with all of us. take care m'friend. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Liz, Beautiful. This maybe/mostlikely is one of my five favorite poems found on the forum. I love it and it speaks volumns to me. Bless you much today my sweet friend.marcy |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
A life not lived to the fullest is a life not worth living, and you surely seem to have fully lived! Elizabeth And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why? |
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