Open Poetry #7 |
Smile |
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Looking at your smile I knew I was in love I can see myself sharing that smile each and everyday for the rest of my life What I felt from that moment on the smile that I saw over and over the picture of your face in my mind my words are bind by that smile I hope you come to realize what I feel for you sharing my love with that perfect smile melting heart is what I felt upon receiving your smile your smile struck me like a cupid's arrow I couldn't turn from that smile as my focus grew deeper I came to realize that what I saw were pearls of heaven aligning your rose lips Seeing you smile laid my soul at ease stranger is what I seen not now for your smile has said what words cannot express your lips have spoken without moving at all your silence smile has me under a spell my attention is what u shall receive in return I ask of you this my dear that u shall not fade that smile which has been shining brightly. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicley written. Yep, a smile can be pretty nice to look at sometimes. |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
loveley poem It's great the way we can all focus in on the little things about someone that all add up to make us love them. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I thank you for your kind words. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A smile can break down a lot of barriers! It disarms your enemy and lets someone know you are a nice person! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~your lips have spoken without moving at all. *I love this. A smile is a language that ALL understand. Great poem you have here. . |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I know sometimes we only have a photograph and that memory or smile on that photo says it all, sometimes it is a smile from a complete stranger...great poem, full of emotion, I can tell you are captivated by this person. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I want to tell this person what I feel so I plan to give them this poem which infact was inspired by them. I thank you again for your kind comments. It is people like you who give me the power, inspiration and motivation to keep on writing. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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