Open Poetry #7 |
Rekindled Dreams |
David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Rekindled Dreams My days of youth were spent in foolish thought, While dreams of ideal love did fill my head. My perfect complement with fervor sought, A mate, a confidante, a matching thread. But dreams unfed must simply fade and die, And leave behind an empty lifeless shell. It’s there I found myself to wonder why, And wallow in my self constructed hell. In you, my love, my dreams once more may live, No angel ever loved me as you do, Or wanted me enough to freely give That deepest self that others never knew. If dream this be then let me not awake, My life to sleep I’d give for your love’s sake. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
But dreams unfed must simply fade and die, And leave behind an empty lifeless shell. It’s there I found myself to wonder why, And wallow in my self constructed hell. In you, my love, my dreams once more may live, No angel ever loved me as you do, Or wanted me enough to freely give That deepest self that others never knew. If dream this be then let me not awake, My life to sleep I’d give for your love’s sake. --------------- man, you are just so good at this... like second skin and breathing sonnets run thru you. this one's emotions are powerful always enjoy reading these,and no two ever seem the same... great work D2 later-sonnet-man-gator jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
this was great! I had never seen your name before and then I looked and saw how many posts you had and said WOW how'd I miss this guy and his great poetry??? I'll keep a weather eye out for more of this stuff ~Heather |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Fine effort, enjoyed the read. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
David2~ Nicely done and a very enjoyable sonnet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I can relate to this poem alot, glad that you had a happy ending, so maybe there is hope for me yet. great poem (or sonnet, as Janet pointed out). really enjoyed it. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful sonnet, David! Very lovely! Denise |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Oooh...it is truly incredible when love is found. This is a beautiful sonnet, keep up the great work! *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
OH! I do so love this sonnet! It gives hope to those of us who as of yet have not found love. I can't wait to read more of your work. "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
David2... This is beautiful. I smiled all the way through! Thanks for sharing! MBlue Pay a visit to: http://cyberageadventures.com You will love it! "A poem is just an expression of my life and heart." Skipper Jim, I love you!:) |
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