Thoughts from the CoffeeShop

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Open Poetry #7

Thoughts from the CoffeeShop

ryoder
New Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 5
Louisville, KY USA

0 posted 2000-06-04 01:12 AM

THOUGHTS FROM THE COFFEESHOP

As I sip, the eddies of a hundred thoughts
Swirl through my consciousness.

Conversations drift about me,
Excited
Secretive
Pensive

I think it's time for a refill.

rob

X Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 1521
Oregon

1 posted 2000-06-04 02:08 AM

Yanno I own a coffee shop and ALL THE TIME is refill time for me

Neat poem...I really like your first lines...

"As I sip, the eddies of a hundred thoughts
Swirl through my consciousness."

thoughts are like that too, nice description

~Heather

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2002-07-07 04:13 AM

too bad poets like this fade into the background and Passion's oblivion.

Lovely little poem, this is.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-01-04 02:24 PM

nice one

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