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ryoder
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 5
Louisville, KY USA

0 posted 2000-06-04 01:12 AM


THOUGHTS FROM THE COFFEESHOP

As I sip, the eddies of a hundred thoughts
Swirl through my consciousness.

Conversations drift about me,
Excited
Secretive
Pensive

I think it's time for a refill.


rob

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X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
1 posted 2000-06-04 02:08 AM


Yanno I own a coffee shop and ALL THE TIME is refill time for me  
Neat poem...I really like your first lines...

"As I sip, the eddies of a hundred thoughts
Swirl through my consciousness."

thoughts are like that too, nice description
~Heather

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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
2 posted 2002-07-07 04:13 AM


too bad poets like this fade into the background and Passion's oblivion.

Lovely little poem, this is.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-01-04 02:24 PM


nice one
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