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You Forgot To Tell My Heart
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You Forgot To Tell My Heart |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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You Forgot To Tell My Heart ~*Marge Tindal*~ You told me you were leaving You said we had to part I know you told my mind but you forgot to tell my heart Suddenly you were gone with just a wave of your hand Even though you told my mind my heart didn't understand You faded from the picture like you'd never been part of all the things I dreamed of with you right from the start And if upon a daydream you should come my way Please don't tell my heart if you don't intend to stay If you should return tomorrow asking for a new start I'd probably be delighted for you forgot to tell my heart ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mom--hate to see you sad...(just lemme at 'im...) prayers, songs, and, of course, hugs...Love to you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity, my child~ It's a P-O-E-M ....  But thank you for caring. Hope you enjoyed it. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ < !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 06-04-2000).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
"You faded from the picture like you'd never been part of all the things I dreamed of with you right from the start" This one brought back some memories Marge, well done as always. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
this poem felt so familiar, did you ever post it here before or am I having deja vu? I thought it was a lovely poem Marge wonderful job ~H |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So beautiful Marge...I can relate to this well...the heart can be so stubborn. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece. *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Marge, my dear, I can certainly relate to this....brought back a flood of memories But, beautifully written as always All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Happy to stir memories for a friend. Thank you for the reply. XAngel~ So far, I've not reposted any of my poetry. I just wrote this one tonight ... thought of a friend who might need it and poof ! there it was ! Deja`Vu! Alwye~ Glad you enjoyed it, hon. Jeffrey~ Glad to know the memories are there to flow. I like that. Thank you, dear friend. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 06-04-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Marge, when I, or anyone can relate and care, it's a G-R-E-A-T P-o-e-m.... and the mark of an artist... For that I will thank you twice. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity, my sweet, sweet child~ For that I will give you TWO hugs ! Love ya' ~*Mom*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a wonderful poem...how often does the heart refuse to believe something. You express that so beautifully in this poem...it really moved me. Thanks for sharing, my mentor! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
yes i'm in that boat and i need to stop riding it i am at sea for eternity if i don't get out but how to let go monique |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I know you told my mind but you forgot to tell my heart" Beautifully written Marge! I especially loved the line above, it's melodic ... music should be placed to your words, what a wonderful song this would make! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 06-04-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Lizzie~ You are always welcome, my little friend. Thank you for being YOU ! Monique~ Thank you for the reply. Pull up anchor and head for port ! Kit~ Thanks, hon. Sooooo, you've heard me singing, huh? It's surprising how many of my poems catch me through a song I just suddenly break into. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge, yet another beautiful poem. It's true although love may leave, it's difficult for the heart to let go, I know this feeling all too well. The first two stanzas are my favourite Love ya o' queen of poetry, Melissa Honeybee |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Beautiful poem, my friend. Doesn't it always seem the heart is the last to know when love ends? I just love that phrase.... "you forgot to tell me heart". It is superb! This one hits close to home for me....oh the memories that come crashing back. Thanks for sharing. Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Marge, I just love this poem. Sometimes the heart just won't listen to the mind. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ I love your replies. You're such a sweetie. Thank you. LoneWolf~ Embrace those memories - they are special. Thanks always for your replies. Eloise~ Thank you, lady. Glad you enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Absolute perfection! I loved it. "And if upon a daydream You should come my way Please don't tell my heart If you don't intend to stay" It touched my heart. Great job. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I liked it very much. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ I'm glad to know it touched you. Thank you. VanDana~ I knew in my heart that you would find it and like it. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Marge! Denise |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
There were times when my heart was left in the dark...I know this feeling. Nicely expressed Marge! Marie~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this reminds me that our hearts simply have a mind of their own! wonderful. Kathleen [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thanks, friend. I KNOW you had a nice visit with Lizzie. Mariee~ Glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Kathleen~ Amen ! You got that right ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Loved this, Marge, saying goodbye sucks the big one. If I had my way, I'd banish that word from the English language, ha! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ LOL @ 'sucks' !  Don't think I've ever used 'goodbye' ... don't intend to start now. Love ya', gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ I have known these feelings first hand. I wrote one sort of like this. I think yours expresses the feelings about a 1,000 x's better!! As always, excellent! -SEA |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Well written, but oh so sad  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Glad you enjoyed it, hon. Thanks for the compliment. Hoot~ Thank you for the reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marge~ this was beautiful! i keep learning things from you everyday. you and janet marie are my mentors at this forum! however no one else please don't be upset lol. you ALL are excellent writers. thanks for sharing this one with us...and i am sure it helped your friend tremendously. it brought back a few memories for me. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ Bless you, sweetheart. What a sweet honor for Janet and myself. You are a lovely gal and have so much to look forward to in your life. Great head on your shoulders and a heart to go with it. Thanks for such a sweet attitude. We love ya' ~*Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Marge, Let the BUM go your heart more precious than his stinking ol' toes As usual, one which stirs emotions and a great job. Made me mad at him. marcy |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yeah, I know Marge...I think people forget to tell my heart quite a bit, too... Elizabeth And this I say to you: why? Why? Just tell me why, so I can understand. Why? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marcy~ It's a P-O-E-M .... But thank you for caring. Hope you enjoyed it. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ I hear that, gal ! Sorry I passed you in Cyber-ville there. Thanks for the read. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marge* Oh how true your words are, the heart is often the last one to know is it not? I also understand your words.... "it's a P-O-E-M" Youdive many places with your poetry...Your work is always amazing to me!! Thank you for sharing this |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Thank you, hon. I like your comment of 'you dive many places in your poetry' ... what a nice thing to say. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
oh my gosh this is precious, it is so true, the mind can make decisions and accept such from others, but the heart.....sigh...its got a way of its own....great writing |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge, back to the top please with this one. It's one of my favorite readings of your poetry posted on screen. Coco |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corazon~ Thank you for the sweet comment. CocoBaci~ How sweet to know that you went through the archives to find this one. I enjoyed writing it and enjoyed knowing you liked it. Thanks so much, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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