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The Splendors Of Night - Kit's Challenge
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The Splendors Of Night - Kit's Challenge |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This was my first poem. It was written as a sophomore in high school. It is also a repost from #5. We watch with amazement As evening is near. The beauty of nature In our earthly sphere. The sun as it's setting Across mountains so fine. The beautiful sunset with colors divine. Lets one know, that evening, Is not far behind. But the light of the moon As it climbs to its height. Changes the evening To the stillness of night. Twinkling stars In the heavens so bright Invite us to look At the splendors of night. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ This is simply breathtakingly lovely. 'Twinkling stars In the heavens so bright Invite us to look At the splendors of night.' Oh, how I love the night. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Eloise~ This is beautiful sweetie, I loved the way it flowed and the beautiful imagery  lovely poem TC~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Hey you! Welcome back! Nice to see you again! This poem is very beautiful! Denise |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Marge, thanks. You know me, moon, stars, night, dreams etc. Appreciate the comments tracie, thanks. Denise, thank you, thank you. I'm so glad to be back. New computer and no disconnecting anymore!! Thanks so much for posting for me also. |
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