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The Passing Of Life As Does The Wind
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The Passing Of Life As Does The Wind |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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The Passing Of Life As Does The Wind The wind rushes by seemingly with places to go, yet no destination was set just forward motion. Seeping in through every crack and crevasse taking charge of the stillest stagnate air moving it about with no sight of effort. The wind having much power can move mountains in time yet float a feather ever so softly with grace and ease. It speaks to those who are listening and wanting to hear of its tales of life’s adventures and sights of the world. Love has bloomed in seeds sent with the wind in the earnest of passions speed, and love has blown away on turbulent waves of scorn tossed out of the hearts safe realm. The wind friend or foe can always be found just around the corner, just around the hill, where ever it will for sure be moving forward as do we until the very end of it’s ride, the end of it’s existence except in memory. By, Cerenity [This message has been edited by Cerenity-1 (edited 06-04-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW Cerenity, loved this very much.. and this... The wind friend or foe can always be found just around the corner, just around the hill, where ever it will for sure be moving forward as do we until the very end of it’s ride, the end of it’s existence except in memory. Well Done. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Dark Angel, So glad to hear from you how have you been? thank you so much for your kind words this just kind of hit me or should I say a BIG gust of wind hit me and this is what came of it, thank you again. Love, Cerenity |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Cenenity, Wow, oh wow! I love this one. You have done a remarkable job. "The wind rushes by seemingly" "having much power can move mountains" "float a feather ever so softly with grace and ease." This one spoke to me and thank you. marcy |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) I loved the way this flowed and the images that you painted. A wonderful job Miss Cerenity! Thank you for sharing it. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful piece Cerenity...great image. Gentle blows...er, flows, all the way through. Really like the way it just kind of drifed begining to end. Nice. And I could see BDC certainly understood. And as usual looking forward to your next piece. jwesley |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, Cerenity! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ I really enjoyed this one, hon. Gentle breezes of friendship blew you my way ... and I'm thankful for that. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marcy, I am glad to meet you, you started the same time I did but I don't remember the name, I am sorry if I missed your work, I will be looking out for it OK. I am so glad you liked this one it came upon the wind in a flash, Thank you. My dear, Butterfly, How are you I see you have sent me the wind and a very cute one at that. I am so glad you enjoyed, thank you. Hi jwesley, Hello how are you doing, I must look you up as well, yes this flowed so nicely just blow my way, thank you so much for your kind words. Hi Denise, Nice to see you, Thank you so much, today just seem to be the day to read and write poetry I was able to spend time and read alot of wonderful work here at passions it was so nice. Hi Marge, No my dear you are were my rainbow ends, at (YOUR) the heart of GOLD!!!! Thank you for your sweet and loving words that encourage me greatly. Love, Cerenity |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was simply beautiful Cerenity ... soothing, calming and richly filled with imagery. I loved it! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Kit, Good morning, Thank you so much for your kind reply, this was a fun one to do. Love, Cerenity |
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