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Aimster
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0 posted 2000-06-03 10:08 AM


Goodbye

I never meant to hurt you, it wasn't what I planned to do
And I hate the fact that I've done this...gone and hurt you

But I am no longer in love with you, I am speaking from the heart
And so now I am sorry but we must seperate and part

For a brief moment in time, we were as one
Never forget that night we made love till the morning sun

But you must forget me, its the only thing left to do
For I am sorry...but I am no longer in love with you

So this is it my sweet...please dont cry
I never was good at saying....saying goodbye


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 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."





[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-03-2000).]

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LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-06-03 10:26 AM


It's always hard to say goodbye, even when you no longer love the person. You describe it well. Good poem

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-06-03 01:40 PM


when we can say good-bye and part as friends it is so much sweeter and it leaves each others heart and self respect in tact...
hopefully a friendship can be left behind as well,
wonderful writing amy
jm

 There are places inside our souls ...
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


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