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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Never Never did such succulence exude From written word Never has a sweeter song poured forth From twittering bird Never have more dulcet tunes danced Round the willow tree Never had a poet written words For only me Never again would calming sea spin fast To giant swells Never would clear water flow more brisk From mountain wells Never would the swallow fly more swiftly Through the breeze Never again would poetry quick bring me to my knees Never again would Milkey Way drift down From skies above And blanket me entirely with blissful Warmth and love Never would I drift again in Heaven’s sparkling sea Nothing is more beautious than the Verse he wrote for me Elizabeth Santos |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Liz: You must be some lucky lady to have a verse written for you...want to share so I can join you?....Cause if it's anything like your verse I'd be on cloud 9, hmmmmm ... ok then cloud 8 cause cloud 9 is reserved for you..  HUSG |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Elizabeth! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Rainbow, I'd love to float on cloud 9 with you. I've got lots of things i'd love to talk to you about. Any chance you could hop on a cloud some day and come over here to the States? or am I asking for too much fun? Love ya HUSG Liz Denise, Thank you, angel. You are always here for us Love ya lots Liz |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"Nevermore shall such words strike my heart as those words he wrote for me." How charming, how sweet, how downright romantic! You're charmed, dear one! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this beautiful descriptive poem. James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sunshine, Thank you for your charming and sweet response James, Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed reading it Liz |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Liz, how lovely it must be. And what a lovely poem you've got here. ~ Claire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, There is one very lucky guy out there somewhere. Your poem is exquisite. Love Sy |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Liz, it must have been some poem to inspire this! Good job. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Claire, Thank you, dear, for your comments Sy, I am the lucky one Lovebug, Thank you for you response and for your inspiration Love Liz |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
It is one of the best feelings, when someone gifts us with something from the heart. Glad you received such a Powerful Gift. Wonderful Poem. Daniel |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Daniel, Thank you so much for your comments Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Never say never when it comes to poetry for a poet never runs out of poetic magesty and one poem so perfect that it brings you to your knees just means another one is waiting you to please. What a beauiful poem you have written, Liz---so romantic and lovely. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is both beautiful and mysterious, Liz....an exciting combination. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is one to read and read because it is so beautiful Kathleen |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Martie, Thanks for the little verse. I think you are right Michael, Your words mean a lot. Thank you Kathleen, And I will read mine over and over Thank you Liz |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Exquisite poem! You have gathered all my deepest emotions about my husband's writings about me, and carefully tucked them into a picnic basket for us to carry out to the woodlands and enjoy together. The spiritual wind that keeps survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope for the world ... R.J.G. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
'Never' better, Liz .... Love this piece .... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Rosemary Proud to be part of your basket Have a fun picnic! Love Liz Pepper, Never better than to hear You are doing well, my dear Now you can come over here To visit me some time this year! Love Liz |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Elizabeth~ You are so lucky as never has this happened to me.  Great poem. Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
*sigh*...wonderful, Liz...in my opinion this is superb! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I'm sorry, Rosemary had to bring this to my attention. Sure am glad, there's so much here to keep up on and I thought to say everything everybody else has already said... Lis your truly wonderful and you can know that and yours are on our prayer list. May God always bless. Love in Christ Always, Dale |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*big smile* |
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