Open Poetry #7 |
My Heart Smiles. . . |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
When I think of you, my heart smiles And my soul begins to laugh For me it's been quite a while Since I have felt like that You always know just what to say To put on my face a grin You bring light to my darkened days You let the bright sun shine in Giver of laughter and of joy Your spirit puts me at rest My sadness your smile destroys This feeling I have, the best ------------------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ Such lovely words when someone makes us feel this way it is very special. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah..a lovely poem. This poem makes my heart smile too. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Your heart smiles through your poetic thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO's and Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh's you write from your heart so well m'friend!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like this positive and unlifting poem. James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends. . . Glad that I could bring this into your days!! ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is just a fun sort of poem that can make everyone smile! Marina |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Great poem Sven! It is a wonderful feeling to have a person like that in your life. Keep up great work! "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
And look! You made this heart smile too!! Lovely Sven I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, You are so sweet and loving I always emagin you with a smile, and here your poetry speaks of it so wonderfully, thank you for sharing. Love, Cerenity |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sven, that was beautiful quite romantic. Giver of laughter and of joy Your spirit puts me at rest My sadness your smile destroys This feeling I have, the best aw love the last verse. cute. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Ah, Sven. That is just one of those 'feel good' poems. I loved it. |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Sven, Heart smiling...soul laughing...lucky lady. ~Lorraine |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all again. . . Marina, glad that you liked. . . DE, yes it is wonderful, my friend is quite special indeed. . . Isis, I'm glad that I could make you smile today my friend. . . Cerenity, thank you so much my friend. . . I do always try to have a smile, never know when you'll need one. . . Brian, thanks so much!!! Glad that you think I'm cute!! LOL Tennessee Angel, welcome and thank you!! Lorriane, thank you so much. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I always like reading your poems.Lovely poem. |
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