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Sven
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0 posted 2000-06-03 12:56 PM


When I think of you, my heart smiles
And my soul begins to laugh
For me it's been quite a while
Since I have felt like that

You always know just what to say
To put on my face a grin
You bring light to my darkened days
You let the bright sun shine in

Giver of laughter and of joy
Your spirit puts me at rest
My sadness your smile destroys
This feeling I have, the best

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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1 posted 2000-06-03 01:02 AM


Sven~
Such lovely words   when someone makes us feel this way it is very special.
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



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2 posted 2000-06-03 01:03 AM


Ah..a lovely poem. This poem makes my heart smile too.  
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-06-03 07:19 AM


Sven~
Your heart smiles through your poetic thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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4 posted 2000-06-03 07:24 AM


OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO's and Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh's
you write from your heart so well m'friend!!

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2000-06-03 07:33 AM


I like this positive and unlifting poem.  James
Sven
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6 posted 2000-06-03 11:40 AM


Thank you all my friends. . .

Glad that I could bring this into your days!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Marina
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7 posted 2000-06-03 11:41 AM


This is just a fun sort of poem that can make everyone smile!

Marina

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8 posted 2000-06-03 11:59 AM


Great poem Sven!  It is a wonderful feeling to have a person like that in your life.     Keep up great work!

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
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Isis
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9 posted 2000-06-03 06:08 PM


And look!  You made this heart smile too!!
Lovely Sven  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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10 posted 2000-06-03 06:53 PM


Hi Sven,

You are so sweet and loving I always emagin you with a smile, and here your poetry speaks of it so wonderfully, thank you for sharing.

Love,  Cerenity

brian madden
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11 posted 2000-06-03 07:00 PM


Sven, that was beautiful quite romantic.

Giver of laughter and of joy
Your spirit puts me at rest
My sadness your smile destroys
This feeling I have, the best

aw love the last verse. cute.  



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12 posted 2000-06-03 07:14 PM


Ah, Sven.  That is just one of those 'feel good' poems.  I loved it.
Lorraine Nisbet
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13 posted 2000-06-03 08:43 PM



Sven,

Heart smiling...soul laughing...lucky lady.

~Lorraine

Sven
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14 posted 2000-06-03 11:44 PM


Thank you all again. . .

Marina, glad that you liked. . .

DE, yes it is wonderful, my friend is quite special indeed. . .

Isis, I'm glad that I could make you smile today my friend. . .  

Cerenity, thank you so much my friend. . . I do always try to have a smile, never know when you'll need one. . .

Brian, thanks so much!!!  Glad that you think I'm cute!!  LOL

Tennessee Angel, welcome and thank you!!

Lorriane, thank you so much. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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15 posted 2000-06-04 11:27 AM


I always like reading your poems.Lovely poem.
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