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prisoner of sorrow
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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she walks in a haze of darkness that shadows her face with unmistakable grief one glance inside the darkness that are her eyes makes people recoil therein... more sorrow than they really cared to know looking away they pass her by they have needs of their own groceries light bills flat tires and such and they shake her haunting eyes out of sight too much sorrow to be able to help her just too much so they don't [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 04-20-2000).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Hey sweetheart I can see I'm going to have to think of that poem real quick..  Seriously, sometimes people hate sadness cause it ends up making them feel so helpless..perhaps none of us should wear masks...wonder what the world would be like then...ooops...see you got me at it and I'm determined to be cheerful today... I thought of something to make you smile...remember my 5 year old boyfriend, the little one with the excessive appetite for hamburgers?...well I asked him one day what he thought a rainbow was and he said..."if you follow it, it takes you to heaven"...bless..  HUSG |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
*great big smiles* yep that did it....and lol....just think what WH could do with that comment *vng* ....thank you rg....its just I remembered during a particularly bad time a friend here did try to stop and help...he asked if I was ok, he said my face reminded him of the look on a prisoner of war...sigh...but I like your memories better [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 04-20-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sorrow can sure make us feel like a prisoner. I wish you brigher days ahead. Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corazon--What RG said is true, sometimes people just don't know how to respond to sadness. Your poem hurt my heart. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
very moving, Corazon...Thank you for this. I enjoyed very much. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Corazon.......This was very touching! And I hope it is an eye opener for many! There will always been someone that "Needs" more than one of us! It doesn't take much to offer help! I don't know about you, but I would go away feeling much better for helping than ignoring! There are things that I can live with out if that means helping someone that's in need more than I! |
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