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~Draped In Lavender Light~
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~Draped In Lavender Light~ |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Patchouli wafts on gentle wing Fragrance flowing with the sea A lady draped in lavender light Drifts softly with her memories. Moonlight glints off amber locks That fall among her tears Eyes cast down to Pluto’s realm Lay entombed in shadowed fear. Beauty is brushed throughout the sky But to love her heart is blind Drenched in darkness lays her soul And no forever can she find. Seraph whispers float on high As her thoughts rest with the sea For there within his watery grave Lay her cherished memories. The tide reaches to touch the face Of the lady draped in light Among the sprays she hears his voice And soon he is in sight. The image fades in moment’s time As the water’s softly churn An eternity she will cry for him And for his tender love yearn. So with a sigh she silently falls Into the darkly coated sea For there among the inky waves With her love she can be. *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*sigh*... i knew i was in for another case of of poet envy just as soon as I saw the title... *sigh*... well, at least you are consistant...*smile* here me sits with a muse who wont write... *sigh* oh well, I'll live...  exquisite poem K, lavendeer is indeed your color... you wear it well later-lilac-gator jm There are places inside our souls ... that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts ... that need to be loved this much. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Ooooh... I liked this one Krista! So dark with such a despairing end (in my mind that's not the answer...) I loved the line like "Lay entombed in shadowed fear." and well the word "Seraph" is just awesome. Great poem Krista! Abrahm Simons "Flew too high and burnt the wing Lost my faith in everything" - Trent Reznor, "Somewhat Damaged" |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Wonderful imagery Krista. Great read!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ Very pretty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a powerful poem, gentle tender imagery shifting seamlessly between beauty and despair. I am in awe. amazing poem. I am going to read this again. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Krista* This is a breathtaking piece...lavender light......BEAUTIFUL...you have a gift and you have shared it well, thank you! |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is just filled with imagery ... hauntingly beautiful Krista, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Krista*~ That was a beautiful poem. You just seem to be getting better and better. "Moonlight glints off amber locks.." that's awesome...Now what inspired you to write this poem? great job. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh, such beauty in the title drew me into what I knew would be a wonderful poem...you never dissapoint me, Krista. Well done! |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so much, I deeply appreciate it. *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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