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vandana
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0 posted 2000-06-02 07:01 PM



You're only one,
As the star so bright,
You whisper me into my ears,
You say the words,
I'm longing to hear,
You're only one,
Who makes me happy ,
You're only one,
Who takes my heart away,
At Night,
Every hour go by slowly,
Don't want to end this night,
It's so right,
to have you beside me,
You're only one,
You'll be forever in my heart,
You're my only one,
You're only for me,

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Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2000-06-02 07:26 PM


Vandana,

Great writing!!  Only one word comes to mind....love.  Just wonderful.  

Lone Wolf


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Denise
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2 posted 2000-06-02 09:04 PM


This is a great expression of love, Vandana!

Denise

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3 posted 2000-06-02 11:14 PM


vandana--

the beauty of love comes from your pen in this one. loved the expressions you have here. lovely!

take care,
amy  

 "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."


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Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."



Mike
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4 posted 2000-06-02 11:38 PM


Very nicely done Vandana...
I enjoyed your poem very much.

tracie66
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5 posted 2000-06-03 09:04 PM


Vandana~
Sweet loving words tenderly written  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2000-06-03 10:16 PM


VanDana~
You sing love so sweetly.
Nicely done, hon.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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