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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-06-02 05:16 PM


You know they say if you laugh more you'll live longer.

Oh yah?

Mmmhmm. It's true. I bet I'll live a long time.  Will you?

I guess.

Yah.  A long time, maybe.  That is unless something sad happens. You know, a kind of sadness that takes over your life and suffocates all the laughter trying to come out.

Oh.  That wouldn't be good would it?

No.  I guess not.  Well, I guess I'll let you go now.  I have to go laugh some more or cry.  Whatever comes first.

Okay.  Goodbye then.

Bye.




[This message has been edited by JOY 14 (edited 06-02-2000).]

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Jana Tovey
Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257
USA
1 posted 2000-06-02 05:57 PM


This sounds like the sort of converation I sometimes have with myself.  Keep smilig...laughter usually follows close behind.
Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2000-06-02 09:31 PM


Been there and done that!!!  Just have to get through that sadness to find happiness...it awaits....around the corner.     Nice writing.

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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