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Fleeting Heart
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Fleeting Heart |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA 
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Swept along like sand in wind My heart moves through the night Hoping it will stop again In its weary flight. Across the land and over sea It flits in endless drifting Away from her and away from me Like sands through hourglass sifting. What did she say? What were the words That caused my heart to leave? It's gone now, left me cold and hurt Bleeding from my sleeve. My heart is sweeps across the plains Like dirt blown in the wind And without it here my soul remains Never to love again. Knowlege tempered by wisdom...Wisdom tamed by youth. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RS, Ouch to this....sorry to hear of your misfortune. I hope that your heart does find love again and that you realize the right person for you will come along some day. Great writing!!  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow,...I love your writing style. Such a nice piece of poetry here...so much emotion expressed. Well done. I hope your heart heals. *Peace. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 06-01-2000).] |
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addiction New Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1Newburyport, MA USA |
brilliant writing. i love you, you know. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad, Rob, yet beautifully done! Denise |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I love the imagery you painted with this sad tale...the winds blowing etc. Painfully beautiful is all I can think to say. Glad to see you posting bro. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~nice poetry~~ a searching heart seeking loves light, adrift with the wind. This piece was enjoyable to read. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sad, but very well written Rob. Haven't seen you in while....nice to have you back. Marina |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Must I tell you again...NEVER say never...tis provoking Fate!!! This is beautiful Rob...glad to see you back for a bit!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Lone Wolf and Spitfire: thank you both. My heart is fine. This was a poem for how I was feeling at the moment...not forever as mentioned. addiction - love you too babilicious... dsnyder - Thank you Denise. pFF - love you sis... thanks for your comments. I miss you too. Danny - Thanks Marina - Thank you. It's good to be back. devina - how well I know. Thank you for your comments. i'll try to stick around this time. |
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