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Jana Tovey
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since 2000-05-30
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0 posted 2000-06-02 10:43 AM


The "mind game" is a lonely game
there are no opponents,
only pawns...
moved and manipulated,
extensions of the single player,
for awhile anyway.

But, pawns mature, get wise
and leave the manipulator,
alone...
to face the fact that without pawns
distraction fades, and self-awareness
moves right in.

Panic! The manipulator must find
a new distraction, a new
Obsession...
to obliterate the total and utter
blackness of the one remaining,
now isolated within.

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Severn
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1 posted 2000-06-02 11:06 AM


Wow - this is great...how truly insightful...


Temptress
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since 1999-06-15
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2 posted 2000-06-02 04:21 PM


Well put.   Something to think about isn't it?  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"



brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
3 posted 2000-06-02 04:50 PM


Panic! The manipulator must find
a new distraction, a new
Obsession...
to obliterate the total and utter
blackness of the one remaining,
now isolated within.

I know what it is like to play this game, it is a hard one, and how says words cannot cause pain. wonderful poem.

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

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