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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
*Written at 8 years of age* There you are with your carving knives... Whittle Whittle Whittle. Here I am cut down to size... Little Little Little. ©2000~CJB~ |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Very interesting... What did you write the poem about? Is it symbolic? |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Sorry  ...The poem has to do with the feelings of a little girl who was raised in a family where the parents only liked boys.I have four brothers/one sister! Girls didn't mean anything... they were a small speck in the universe. I managed to find lots of role models who loved girls and boys both. MB |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, that's so sad coming from an 8 year old precious heart ... I'm glad you gave a little explanation and were able to find some good role models to help you turn that feeling around. Challenge well met Magnolia Blue ... you might be the youngest post to the challenge I've seen yet at 8 years, and very creative! Well done. Best wishes, /Kit |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow I didn't see a first poem challenge Magnolia COOL stay tuned for mine I was 8 too. ~netswan |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Thank you Kit and Netswan... I love the challenge of first poem.I hope a lot of poets will contribute.There are so many neat words and thoughts that come from the heart of a child. I will look for yours too, netswan! Thanks again. MBlue |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is excellent, MB! I can't believe an 8 year old wrote this! I am impressed! Denise |
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