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Dreams(first poem-for Kit's challenge)
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Dreams(first poem-for Kit's challenge) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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They tell me you are a lost cause a silly dream- like Santa Claus But I believe in dreams even the ones that seem may never come true Like the one I dream about- Being loved by you. -SEA- (1983) |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a precious SEA ... and 16 years ago! Its a perfect little sentiment wrapped up in a sweet and tender verse. Challenge well met SEA ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Soft and tender and really gets your message across. James |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Ah SEA what a beautiful first poem. How tender. ~netswan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SEA-GIRLS BACK...COOL  very sweet poem...wistful and innocent. this has been so cool getting to read everyones early works later Sea-gator jm There are places inside our souls ... that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts ... that need to be loved this much. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, SEA!  Denise |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi SEA That was a very tender message. A_L |
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