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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-06-01 02:08 PM


The Art of It All
[dedicated to Hoot_Owl_RN]

It is now left to my deft imagination
the words you leave behind ~
I can take each one and all apart
thus making every one of them mine.

It is not like a painting rare
nor like a videotape
I can separate the stanzas fine
and in them find escape.

I can sing the lyrics in my mind
or whisper them soft and low
I could yell them to the universe
or read them as a fiery glow.

I may shiver at their dark intent
or blush from the vision sprung,
perhaps despair is what you meant,
or a recall of my days when young.

But do believe, no matter what you do
I shall cherish the words of you ~
for the Art of you and your Words
leave to my imagination things unheard.


~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ruth, thank you for all you've done, written, said, responded to, and for being such a wonderful friend.

1 June 2000
©KRJ




 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
ESP
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1 posted 2000-06-01 02:16 PM


Beautiful dedication for a wonderful person. I know Hoot will love this one. This is the perfect way to honour her for all that she has done for all of us. Thanks Hoot for everything.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Martie
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2 posted 2000-06-01 02:46 PM


This is a lovely poem, Sunshine...and she is a lovely lady!
Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-06-01 02:54 PM


Thank you Lizzie - I sent her an e-card to make sure she gets it...and if she follows the thread back, she will see your lovely message...

and Martie, you are right on! She's a terrific lady...

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 2000-06-02 10:21 AM


I'm sitting here right now with tears in my eyes at such a beautiful tribute to me...of all people!! Thank you for the lovely poem, the kind, kind words and for your support and friendship. Words fail me at this time, but know how much this means to me and also to Lizzie and Martie...thanks so much you two.
Hugs  

    

Denise
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5 posted 2000-06-02 10:39 AM


This is a beautiful tribute to Ruth, Sunshine!  

Denise

LngJhnAg
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6 posted 2000-06-02 10:57 AM


Sunshine

You picked an easy, easy, way-too-easy subject.  Ruth is all those things you said and more - she is one classy lady.  Even though the subject was easy, you did a fine job of weaving in sentiments about Ruth we all share.  Very nicely done - thank you for sharing our own feelings for this wonderful woman.

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2000-06-02 12:51 PM


It is now left to my deft imagination
the words you leave behind ~
I can take each one and all apart
thus making every one of them mine.
---------------
But do believe, no matter what you do
I shall cherish the words of you ~
for the Art of you and your Words
leave to my imagination things unheard.
----------------

Sun, this poem is stunning...
those verses above are breathtaking
a perfect tribute so a very special poet and friend.
she sent many a smile my way...
thank you hoot-girl.
exceptional poem Sunshine.
take care, jm

 There are places inside our souls ...
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Sunshine
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8 posted 2000-06-02 02:03 PM


Hoot, we just want you to visit often...but everything said is true...

denise, thanks...

LJA, "easy?"  I don't think so!  But thanks for checking in...

JM, thank you very much...

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


Lone Wolf
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9 posted 2000-06-02 09:38 PM


A special poem for a very special person!!!  Great tribute, Sunshine.     

Lone Wolf


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Jana Tovey
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10 posted 2000-06-02 11:03 PM


O.K.  I'm new here, but if I could put my finger on the purpose of such a place as this...I hope it would be all that you just described.  Sharing your inner thoughts is so personal...and to do it like this, sharing with people who are represented only by their words...well, it's an interesting experience.  I like all the forms of communicating, but I really like the form of communication that I have found here.  I enjoyed your tribute to your friend immensely.  Thank you for sharing.

[This message has been edited by Jana Tovey (edited 06-02-2000).]

tracie66
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11 posted 2000-06-03 02:33 AM


Sunshine~
Great dedication to a wonderful Poet, Moderator, friend and much more to all of us.
3 cheers to you and to Ruth  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Sunshine
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12 posted 2000-06-03 02:51 PM


Lone Wolf, thank you for your comments...

Jana, you've hit the nail on it's head...that is EXACTLY what Passions is all about... welcome, and enjoy your stay...

Tracie, all cheers are directed towards Hoot...thank you...

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


brian madden
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13 posted 2000-06-03 02:57 PM


a wonderful poem and beautiful tribute to Ruth, her poems touched us all.

I can sing the lyrics in my mind
or whisper them soft and low
I could yell them to the universe
or read them as a fiery glow.

I may shiver at their dark intent
or blush from the vision sprung,
perhaps despair is what you meant,
or a recall of my days when young.

But do believe, no matter what you do
I shall cherish the words of you ~
for the Art of you and your Words
leave to my imagination things unheard.




 ------------------------
"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

Sunshine
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14 posted 2000-06-03 03:14 PM


Thank you Brian...I hope Ruth comes back soon...

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


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