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This is a test |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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This is a test …testing, testing do you hear me? …testing, testing do you see me? …testing, testing one two three in the silence of my room I wonder the tests I shall resume when away from stage and microphone when I'm away and all alone …testing, testing …one two three where all of life is but a stage where some of us may reach old age where some of us will be called away before we've had the chance to say …testing, testing do you hear me? …testing, testing do you see me? So please do know when the testing is done exit stage left, to sit with the Son. ©KRJ 29 May 2000 Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Hello, is there anybody out there??? This is what this reminded me of immediately, Karilea... sing along to your heart's desire, we are listening... regards, sudhir... Hey you, out there in the cold, Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me? Hey you, standing in the aisle, With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me? Hey you, don't help them to bury the light. Don't give in without a fight. Hey you, out there on your own, Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me? Hey you, with your ear against the wall, Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me? Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone? Open your heart, I'm coming home.... by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Well .... aren't we a bit 'testy' today !  Hey gal .... enjoy the day. Rehearsal at eight ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sometimes my life feels like a test that I didn't study for...I like this poem! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
one, two, three, k-i-s-s-i-n-g .... first comes love then comes marriage then comes baby in the baby carriage.... Thats first thing that popped into my mind from when I was a kid playing kissing tag... ok your it. Parker |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I loved this poem! Yes, all the world is a stage, and it is also a test. A great combo of metaphors. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
I like this one a lot |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Great one Sunshine ... I truly believe that life is but a test! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Great comments all...you've left me smiling! Thanks, everyone... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What a great idea for a poem! This test tickles me  |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Just give me a multiple choice and then let me guess. Interesting poem Sunhine..enjoyed the read! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nothing pleases me more than tickling 'Deer!... Martie, your exam is in the mail...thanks!... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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