Crystal Water - Kit's Challenge - First poem I ever wrote(high School)

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Crystal Water - Kit's Challenge - First poem I ever wrote(high School)

spiked
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since 2000-01-13

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Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-06-01 01:20 PM

Crystal Water

The sparkle of the crystal water
shows so bright and clear
The waves that slowly wash to shore
In the stillness of the day.

[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 06-01-2000).]

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

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1 posted 2000-06-01 02:30 PM

a study of meditation...beautifully expressed...

spiked
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since 2000-01-13

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Hammond, La USA

2 posted 2000-06-01 02:35 PM

lol
Meditation before the capacity to meditate.
Thanks Serenity
was written from an picture on the class wall.
Teacher made me do it.

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

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state of confusion

3 posted 2000-06-01 08:52 PM

awesome early poem!

Corinne

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

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Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2000-06-01 09:13 PM

Teacher made a lot of us do it Spiked ... and I'm sooooooo glad! Great start to your penmanship ... pretty picture, thanks for sharing it Spiked.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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