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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2000-06-01 12:49 PM


ok well my first written work is lost (cry) but on tape in secret hidden archives are my first words and they were simplyly poetic  

Da da doo doo zippity zoo
Gaa gaa goo goo me better than you
Baa baa bye bye thptttttt
Naa naa hi hi zhptttttt




 in a canyon in a cavern excavatin for a mine
dwelt a miner forty niner and his daughter clemintine!!! yeehaw!

© Copyright 2000 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 2000-06-01 01:50 AM


Geesh..What a genius you were at that age.  
Insightful poetry here...err..*GIGGLES*


 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"



Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2000-06-01 05:37 AM


Bravo!  Now ... I've sent these off to the FBI decoding division so we can really understand you!  Good one WayOutWalt!

Best wishes,
/Kit

killer222
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since 2000-04-06
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3 posted 2000-06-01 08:54 AM


Hey thats better than what I wrote this morning  

UTA


 "shun the frumious Bandersnatch!"
Killer222 :)


Corazon
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4 posted 2000-06-01 09:40 AM


wow....the style....the form....this is incredible......how old did you say you were? a child genius!
rofg.....thanks for the smiles  

Poet deVine
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5 posted 2000-06-01 09:43 AM


Sounds like me snoring! (I snore in sonnets)..cute poem Walt.
TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
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6 posted 2000-06-01 10:57 AM


Walt~
     I can't stop laughing.  That is some of the best work I have ever read.  I know why you are so good now.....You got a very early start!


thptttttt!



Love Ya~

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
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7 posted 2000-06-02 12:01 PM


one of the best FIRST poems ever!

nanny nanny boo boo! :P

i really love it!

how old were you when you wrote this? hehe

classic walt!

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
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8 posted 2000-06-02 03:37 AM


way out  I am just speechless LOL
how do you know those were your first
wrods LOL???
mine were  BABA

~netswan

Nan
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9 posted 2000-06-02 07:24 AM


Geesh... You were easier to understand then...
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