Open Poetry #7 |
Wayoutwalt's First Poetic Words (Drama) or na na na na hi hi bye bye |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
ok well my first written work is lost (cry) but on tape in secret hidden archives are my first words and they were simplyly poetic Da da doo doo zippity zoo Gaa gaa goo goo me better than you Baa baa bye bye thptttttt Naa naa hi hi zhptttttt in a canyon in a cavern excavatin for a mine dwelt a miner forty niner and his daughter clemintine!!! yeehaw! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Geesh..What a genius you were at that age. Insightful poetry here...err..*GIGGLES* Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Bravo! Now ... I've sent these off to the FBI decoding division so we can really understand you! Good one WayOutWalt! Best wishes, /Kit |
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killer222 Junior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 48Northolt,Middlesex,England |
Hey thats better than what I wrote this morning UTA "shun the frumious Bandersnatch!" Killer222 :) |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
wow....the style....the form....this is incredible......how old did you say you were? a child genius! rofg.....thanks for the smiles |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sounds like me snoring! (I snore in sonnets)..cute poem Walt. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Walt~ I can't stop laughing. That is some of the best work I have ever read. I know why you are so good now.....You got a very early start! thptttttt! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
one of the best FIRST poems ever! nanny nanny boo boo! :P i really love it! how old were you when you wrote this? hehe classic walt! |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
way out I am just speechless LOL how do you know those were your first wrods LOL??? mine were BABA ~netswan |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh... You were easier to understand then... |
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