Open Poetry #7 |
Angel |
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
ANGEL The whisper of your memory Dances across my mind Some people don’t understand How you’ve touched my life But you showed me more Than other people ever could You showed me hope You showed me how to be brave Smiling through your pain Always offering a kind hand Always offering words of care Never complaining or faltering I know you look down on us now Not with sadness of being gone But with peace and love Watching over us With the memory of you Forever embedded in our hearts |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Rosepetals* Welcome to Passions!! You have made a beautiful entrance with this post, delicate and flowing from the heart. Thank you for sharing it, I look forward to more in the future. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
First, let me say that I love rose petals, They adorn the entrance to my home and are laced thoughout my poems. Second, your heart is revealed in your first poem and so I KNOW that I love rose petals Third, Welcome to passions, rose petals Liz |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Thank you for the warm welcome. I am still trying to figure all this out, so please be patient. I'm glad you liked my poem. It was written for a very special friend that I met online. She passed away about 2 months ago of cancer. I was on my way to work the day after and was thinking of her. I jotted this down on a piece of scrap paper beore I went in. It is one of my favorite poems. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Rosepetals! This is a lovely and touching tribute to your friend. I'm sure she'd love it. Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a touching and tender verse you've penned RosePetals. Very lovely! Welcome to Passions! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, indeed... Welcome to Passions.. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Rosepetals, Wonderful first post and welcome to passions hope to see more of your work. Love, Cerenity |
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