Reflection(and world's shortest poem challenge)

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Reflection(and world's shortest poem challenge)

kaile

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0 posted 2000-05-31 07:45 AM

Reflection

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Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-05-31 09:55 AM

(world's shortest reply to the world's shortest poem)

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2000-05-31 10:11 AM

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The world's most famous query for this one!!!

Regards, sudhir

Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....

by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall

Mon Cherie

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since 2001-10-31

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Land of Never-ending Summers

3 posted 2001-12-05 01:17 PM

Kaile, shouldn't reflection be like this?

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